MURDER ON A BUS TOUR by Dawn Brooks

 2.5* Sadly, quite tedious with all the sniping and bitching, and it's ageist. Needs editing.

Based on this offering, although I quite like cosy mysteries, the elements mentioned in the title were very off-putting. Edna was a vain whinger and Marjorie was supercilious and had umpteen conversations in her head. The two men were the better characters.

I found the book ageist in its moans about getting old; about one of the older men having a lite version of his head being turned by a middle-aged female; about mansplaining how the older characters used their phones and embraced technology  - sadly, not at all believable based on my IRL experience of trying to help my mum with Mobile Phone 101. There was too much telling and not enough showing. None if the characters were interesting enough, and tbh, Marjorie and Edna were turn-offs who both spoilt the tale.

ARC courtesy of NetGalley and Storm Publishing for my reading pleasure. 

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